"For as long as I can remember, there was a man who lived out in the desert. Some say he is god. Others say he is a demon. There are tales of him saving villages, and myths of his ability to find water. He is a legend that, even now, is told among the children" This is a flash fiction about a girl's meeting with 'the man in the desert.' Where no one survives out there, what secrets does he hide?
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Doesn't flow well
First I'll admit I only read the first several pages but I can't do much more than that. Aside from the poor editing, the story itself is either cliche or predictable. Like I said it also doesnt flow well, there are strange holes. Though I will give it two stars for being a really good idea.