Publisher Description

Gawain is growing up in a world of gigantic castles, knights, and magnificent horses. A place where magic is as commonplace as the swords the knights carry at their sides in battle. Volmoria is a wonderful land made up of vast mountain ranges, forests, rivers streams, barrens and plains. Populated by humans, elves, trolls, dwarfs, orcs and some say nymphs and fairies but we all know that they are from children's stories right?

GENRE
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
RELEASED
2013
April 17
LANGUAGE
EN
English
LENGTH
34
Pages
PUBLISHER
William E Samela
SELLER
Smashwords, Inc.
SIZE
74.9
KB

Customer Reviews

Horselover937 ,

Errors

This is a lovely story about a boy and his horse, and I loved it very much. But I have seen many errors with the sentences. Listen to this: I like my dog she is nice Daisy is super fun she plays all the time. That is what the sentences in this book sounded like. It should be: I like my dog, she is very nice. Daisy is super fun and she plays all the time. I am definitely not trying to be mean, just handing out some constructive criticism.

18livi2006 ,

The swayback horse

It is very short and I don’t like the ending. Why is the boys time with the horse so short. The prologue has nothing to do with the book I don’t understand it.

kathrynofchaos ,

The swayback horse

The story went absolutely nowhere.
It was actually painful and difficult to read due to the constant run on sentences. Please find an editor who has passed basic English and creative writing classes.

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