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Publisher Description

Gemma thought she was trapped—that Stephan had finally won. But then time resets and she’s given another chance. The clock is ticking as Gemma tries to figure out how to change the vision that ends the world in ice. If she can, then maybe she can save the world from Stephan and give her and Alex a chance at a real future. But changing visions can be dangerous, and sometimes one small mistake can lead to disastrous results.

GENRE
Young Adult
RELEASED
2011
December 5
LANGUAGE
EN
English
LENGTH
257
Pages
PUBLISHER
Jessica Sorensen
SELLER
Smashwords, Inc.
SIZE
316.6
KB

Customer Reviews

MasterDelve ,

can you get the 4th book on itunes please :)

i am about to read the 2nd and 3rd book back to back. I just bought them on here and can't wait to read them. i really wish the 4th book was on itunes so i could read the last 3 books in one shot. THESE books are amazing. Its a good read at a cheap price. I HIGHLY, HIGHLY, recommend it. :)

Torn in the heart ,

😍❤️

I absolutely love this honestly I wish it was a movie where I could just rewatch it.

Sam123456789f ,

Horrible book. Poorly written.

I actually loved the first book in this series. The idea of the book and what it could be was intriguing. You have the main plot and the appropriate surprises/side stories that follow along with the main plot. But as I continue to read the series the writing gets redundant. The dialogue between the characters doesn’t change. It’s emotionless, secretive, pointless, and a lot of screaming for no reason. Nothing comes of it. There is no character development. The other redundancy is the main girl going thru an issue, sometimes big sometimes small, and she reflects on being broken. “I realized that I am broken” has been used countless times. And every time something slightly different goes on in her head she thinks she is dead.

The spelling mistakes and poor grammar are countless. Ex: the fire melted at my feet. The writing is completely juvenile.

(Spoilers) Then there’s the plot. Apparently it gets worse from the world ending to the world ending. All the characters are distraught over it but nothing has changed. Then the plot gets more complicated. And if that’s not enough there are even more side stories added. The drama is getting seriously annoying. Every single character is acting childish and I mean childish. The characters are not acting remotely close to their given age.

There was also 34 unnecessary and overly dramatic side stories that had nothing to do with the plot. There was way too much going on. Even the author couldn’t keep up with it! That’s bad. This book was completely pointless. You can read the first chapter and the last chapter and not miss anything. Honestly I felt like the author created this book to pull in extra money. When I found out that the original future was supposed to be the main two characters dying I was thrilled because they are so annoying. You know it’s a poorly written book when you don’t even like a single character. And the main characters were my least favorite of all.

Lastly, the author isn’t imaginative, she gets her ideas from Harry Potter. The mark of malfiscus is basically the deathly hollows symbol. The death eaters are dementors.

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