Trouble

I liked how the plot of it all developed and the overall premise of the book, but there was a lot of fluff which could have made room for a longer climax had it been excluded. I felt that the end was rushed especially as it was just getting good! But clearly it’s a ploy to make us read the next one. COUNT ME IN 😭

Not a good one. Tried to force myself to read.... but it got worse and worse. I stopped the minute I realized the author had forgotten what she had developed for her own character. 1st chapter she mentions how her parents had moved to Wisconsin, sold all of their houses..... then later down the line - out of the blue- it turns out they DIDn’t sell their last house in Illinois, and this was apparently rented and a source of income for the main character????? Oh- not to mention her parents were not in small town in Wisconsin- they were in Florida. Additionally- wouldn’t ANY author at least fact check little things like how long of a drive it is from Illinois to Detroit????? Pretty positive nobody is making the drive from Detroit to the border of Illinois in less than an hour.
If I’m going to make the effort to try to read this... at least get the details correct and don’t make stuff up out of the clear blue!!!

This book is incredibly slow! Little to no interaction between the two main characters for 14 chapters! I gave up! Also, the lack of continuity between chapters is disappointing. Not to mention the NUMEROUS grammatical errors!