War Dragons

This was a pretty good book if you play war dragons it is a good read, it kept me interested, I only gave it 4 stars because I felt some of the grammar was off,I felt like it should have been proofread better before it was published

A relatively easy read that utilizes a periodic switched viewpoint strategy to build the arguments for two different sides. There are a few things to keep in mind, however; I will mention these below.
(No Storyline Spoilers)

Switched Viewpoint-

Pro: Gives interesting insight to the thought process of the two main characters

Con: Took away from the story in some areas by causing the reader to be stuck in the neutral between the two (which may have been intended, due to the ending).

Written as a Prologue for an App Game-

Pro: Gives background to the game.

Con: The ending is never firmly resolved, creating an incomplete feeling. This would be more excusable if such an ending could be met with more depth by the start-up story for the app.

Utilization of Names Found in the App as a Reward

Pro: Neat to be featured in something like this and to give app connections.

Con: Many names were randomly thrown in with not much backing or significance to them. (Thrown in for the sake of being thrown in)

Small Grammatical Errors When it Came to Singular/Plural Things-

Pro: A common mistake seen in many works.

Con: Caused reader confusion in some areas if noticed.

Storyline-

Pro: Interesting and unique twists

Con: Fell bland and gave a "when is the story story going to start" feel in some parts that should have had an emotional climax and also may not be suitable to sensitive younger readers. I emphasize the sensitive part, as there is no adult content, but some humane violence.

Length-

Pro: Short read, which is what most app users will be able to finish. In this timeframe, it covers a good amount of material. Definitely the best choice considering the audience.

Con: Storyline could have had a huge amount of reader-engaging and world-building detail of done in a larger format. This would make the story have a greater impact on reader emotions. (Think Game of Thrones or Temeraire length.) I just can't help but wonder what could have happened with this kind of length.

The read is quick and easy, however there are many spelling, grammatical, and other language mistakes that in my opinion, take away from the story.

As with most of PG's efforts with War Dragons, this story is touted as epic, but falls shy of the mark.

"Wait for the update" has become a common line in the War Dragons universe, as that includes the second edition of this book.