Warning: Objects In Mirror Are Closer Than They Appear

Huh?

Starts off a little confusing, sorts itself out in the middle, and ends with a "Huh?". The author tries a little too hard to add detail into the storyline. It promises to be a good story, but the finale comes across as if the author had gotten tired of writing and just ended it. Not wanting to spoil the end, I will just say that the author ends the story by adding assumptions by the protagonist that aren't supported by the storyline. This could have been a great thriller had it been allowed to mature into a full-fledged story. But as it is, it leaves the reader scratching his head with a puzzled look on their face.