Werewolf Romance: Forgotten Flower
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3.4 • 107 Ratings
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Publisher Description
WEREWOLF ROMANCE
Searching for something different would change her life forever...
Casey was a woman who was looking for something different, but she never found that at the club her and her best friend went to. But tonight was different, for she met a man and Dexter who caught her eye and interested her. The two of them talked, and soon they were getting closer than ever. It seemed normal, but the truth was, she didn't know where to begin with him, and something seemed off.
When the truth gets revealed and his true nature exposed, will Casey still accept him? And will she be able to understand the feelings that she has, the feelings that she has never felt for a man before?
Customer Reviews
Review
I thought the subject and story line was good, but it was too short. It had a good beginning which grabbed the reader to continue reading.
Also, I did not like the cursing that was in every paragraph. Another thing is try to get the book proofread by a professional. Have a friend that is a guy and another that is a girl read your book to make sure the content leans to both sexes would help too.
Immature Writing
It read like a twelve year old wrote it, trying to sound grownup.
Good story line, bad grammar
The story line was good but there was a lot of grammatical errors that just made it hard to keep on reading. As well as repetitive sentences which to be honest was a little annoying to read the same sentence multiple times in one chapter. Like I said though, you have a good story line.
Also, races don’t need to be mentioned as often as you mentioned them. Describing them in the beginning of the book, ethnicity, looks, likes, dislikes and such is good but not continuously repeating in within the book.