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Her best point was recognizing political manipulation disguised as empathy to gain power, yet seems to be vulnerable to it herself. you could tell something was going to happen by reading that because everytime someone says that, it ends up becoming reality. The characters and their situations were also frustratingly unrealistic. POINT! None! There was never a part where I felt safe in letting this book sit overnight because I knew that the story and the what if's would play endlessly in my mind. Naomi and Knox are getting close.