Cyborg's Price
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4.3 • 23 Ratings
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- $4.99
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- $4.99
Publisher Description
He's one of the most dangerous creatures in the galaxy. Why can't she keep her hands off him?
A junior nurse aboard the Combined Fleet Ship Valkyrie, Samara's days are usually filled with minor bumps and scraps and the occasional health or workspace check. But when a dangerous prisoner is transferred aboard, she finds herself on brig duty. Dealing with the lethal-looking military-grade cyborg should be terrifying, but one look into his green eyes and she can't think of anything other than what he looks like under the grey ship suit...
She's small, soft...and his enemy. He should keep his hands to himself and forget her.
Captured and en route to a medical facility for dissection and study, cyborg Lyon expects to be treated like a piece of machinery by his captors. But Samara isn't like the rest, treating his wounds with care and igniting a fire deep within. When his team arrives, he knows he should walk away... but he can't. His little human has gotten under his skin. He'll take her as his due, keep her in his bed and pleasure them both for as long as he has breath left in his body.
However, the universe, and the Fleet, have other ideas. A tracker on board brings a horde of fleet ships down on their heads. Can Lyon and Samara survive betrayal, a fleet attack and their own suspicions, or will their happily ever after disintegrate under enemy fire?
Customer Reviews
Anticlimactic & Poorly Finished
Again this story like the last one is light on detail, though at least it ends less abruptly… sort of. Nothing really gets explained to the reader or the characters and the end climax is a little anticlimactic and rushed. There’s more build up giving the impression of something going on than there actually is.
Also I never felt the characters were in any REAL danger. If they had been captured again and Samara had to figure a way to get all 3 cyborgs away from the fleet (and off the ship) it would have been more interesting. ESPECIALLY if she got the closure of knowing why her captain had all the nurses tagged with trackers. Having the whole nursing staff turn on him would have been pretty freaking cathartic and would have aided in the escape also. That would have been a better ending or near ending, the chase and whatnot could have happened after the escape and would have had more impact.
The other book (her empath) suffered the same problem, the ending was a rushed mess and took away from the story’s impact and feeling of tension making the entirety of the story before it seem like a waste of time.
It was a good concept but was executed poorly.