Warriors
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2.4 • 67 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Mosskit dreams her way into Starclan. She meets Mossyear, a Starclan cat who makes her a promise. The promise is that he will teach her to catch prey, to hunt and fish.
Created by a Sir John Franklin student in Yellowknife NWT.
Customer Reviews
Maybe????
This is totally 💯% copyright © and just down right looks like it was made by a five year old (no offence) but like here are some suggestions:
1.please fix up ur grammar like commas, exclamation marks and spelling
2. Please try harder and like actually read the books 📚
3. Take ur time…like I did with this review lol 😆
4. Maybe take some drawing ✍️ lessons? 😅
5. My friend is writing a 🚾 book 📖 and even she’s doing better than you
Any way I hope you take my advise for granted so 1 1\2 stars ⭐️
Great start! :3
This book defiantly takes a lot of patience and guess work do find out what’s going on, HOWEVER! It’s an amazing start, i love how they included a map of the territory’s, and the front cover is abserlutely gorgeous <33 Keep it up!!
Erm.. Ok???
This is soo copirited and it doesnt really make sense and it a bit repedative and cofusing so maybe for the next few books u could: use different names٫ use stronger adjectives٫ keep it in past tense٫ and use the structure of a text : Intro - build up - problem - resolution - ending...
My tip is to read 📖 books 📚 and get inspired✨
also im trying to be offensive.