Warriors
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2.4 • 69 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Mosskit dreams her way into Starclan. She meets Mossyear, a Starclan cat who makes her a promise. The promise is that he will teach her to catch prey, to hunt and fish.
Created by a Sir John Franklin student in Yellowknife NWT.
Customer Reviews
Ummm…. Ok?
It’s uh… a very…. Different book! Im a bookworm but…. Didnt get into it. Grammar was bad. You acted like we already knew the book before u wrote it.(very hard to understand). It’s need SO MUCH work. Keep trying though, you’ll get better! I’ll look forward to hopefully reading more professional versions! (Btw cover art was… not good.) but keep going and you’ll make it!!!<3<3<3(and I honestly LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE warriors and are probs one of its biggest fans but this…. Makes me feel like this: >:( oh and this :( ) but …. After all that I believe in you!<3<3<3<3<3(btwww, Moonpalt?! What is this, having typos on a professional book app? Your grammar is bad enough!)(*see moonpalt pg 12*) But still good luck….<3
Good but desperately needs improvement
First I want to congratulate you for trying your best, but there are a lot of mistakes.
Grammar: There are a ton of grammar mistakes that need to be fixed.
Spelling: Please spell check your books!
Other: It switches between past tense and present tense a lot and it is quite confusing. Also just the way it is written is very confusing. Also I suggest a lot more detail.
Please fix these mistakes!!!
Erm.. Ok???
This is soo copirited and it doesnt really make sense and it a bit repedative and cofusing so maybe for the next few books u could: use different names٫ use stronger adjectives٫ keep it in past tense٫ and use the structure of a text : Intro - build up - problem - resolution - ending...
My tip is to read 📖 books 📚 and get inspired✨
also im trying to be NOT offensive.