Warriors
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2.4 • 68 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Mosskit dreams her way into Starclan. She meets Mossyear, a Starclan cat who makes her a promise. The promise is that he will teach her to catch prey, to hunt and fish.
Created by a Sir John Franklin student in Yellowknife NWT.
Customer Reviews
Good but desperately needs improvement
First I want to congratulate you for trying your best, but there are a lot of mistakes.
Grammar: There are a ton of grammar mistakes that need to be fixed.
Spelling: Please spell check your books!
Other: It switches between past tense and present tense a lot and it is quite confusing. Also just the way it is written is very confusing. Also I suggest a lot more detail.
Please fix these mistakes!!!
Erm.. Ok???
This is soo copirited and it doesnt really make sense and it a bit repedative and cofusing so maybe for the next few books u could: use different names٫ use stronger adjectives٫ keep it in past tense٫ and use the structure of a text : Intro - build up - problem - resolution - ending...
My tip is to read 📖 books 📚 and get inspired✨
also im trying to be NOT offensive.
Great start! :3
This book defiantly takes a lot of patience and guess work do find out what’s going on, HOWEVER! It’s an amazing start, i love how they included a map of the territory’s, and the front cover is abserlutely gorgeous <33 Keep it up!!