UnEnchanted
An Unfortunate Fairy Tale, Book 1
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4.3 • 1.3K Ratings
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- $8.99
Publisher Description
Mina Grime is unlucky, unpopular and uncoordinated, that is until she saves her crush's life on a field trip, changing her High School status from loser to hero overnight. But with her new found fame brings misfortune in the form of an old family curse come to light. For Mina is descended from the Brothers Grimm and has inherited all of their unfinished fairy tale business. Which includes trying to outwit a powerful Story from making her its next fairytale victim.
To break the fairy tale curse on her family and make these deadly occurrences stop, Mina must finish the tales until the very Grimm end.
Customer Reviews
Good Read
This was a very different take on fairy tales, love all the characters!
Why editors are invaluable...
The story premise was fine. What the book needed was a proper editor and proper formatting. The story jumped between POVs in odd intervals, the pacing was off, and the dialogue rarely brought depth to any character. A well crafted piece of dialogue should be relaying the information that the author then spent time detailing. At best it was like being told the same thing twice.
Can we get over the cliche of the simpering love-struck "heroine" please? Stop using Bella as a role model.
Great book
It’s a great book and is very interesting especially if you know the Grimm tales. Only problem is that I have to pay if I want to read the next book and the story is very very short.