Warriors ScorchFang's Omen
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2.4 • 32 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Scorchkit wants to be Deputy some day, but somehow his Destiny had charged from being a warrior. Starclan changed, his Destiny so he has two choices. He can become a Warrior or become Medicine cat. If he chosoes Medicine cat he can't have a mate, if he chooses Warrior, Starclan will never visit him again. Later on, he actually chooses medicine cat at his Apprentice naming...What happens next...Find out.
Created by: Jordan Claire Drouin a Sir John Franklin High School Student.
Customer Reviews
Keep trying!👍
Hi! I think you did a great job, but I really think you should fix the grammar(no offence) I like to write myself and one day hope to get my books published. But overall I think you did a great job and like the saying goes, “nothing worth having comes easy!” You did great! Just remember; Keep trying!
Bye now!
Oh yeah I almost forgot: I was wondering if you have Erin Hunter’s permission to use her story?
Eh
Lots of spelling mistakes, and at like the middle of the book it stops speaking about scorchpaw, and, birdclan is never spoken of, butterstar and river utter, SERIOUSLY,. cats don’t know what butter is. But other than that it was, nice I guess, not trying to be rude though! Keep trying!
Okay I get the point…
Okay so I know that you want to write a book. But I think the punctuation and everything was pretty terrible but the book was good even though after a few confusions. Keep trying and I hope you don’t give up!!!
Maybe get it checked by me? I mean I’m really good at these editing stuff.
And everyone who reads my comment—I wrote a book called ivypools decision and it will soon be available on Apple Books!
Ummm so okay this book was good but the grammar is bad