Warriors ScorchFang's Omen
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2.5 • 34 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Scorchkit wants to be Deputy some day, but somehow his Destiny had charged from being a warrior. Starclan changed, his Destiny so he has two choices. He can become a Warrior or become Medicine cat. If he chosoes Medicine cat he can't have a mate, if he chooses Warrior, Starclan will never visit him again. Later on, he actually chooses medicine cat at his Apprentice naming...What happens next...Find out.
Created by: Jordan Claire Drouin a Sir John Franklin High School Student.
Customer Reviews
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I am a big fan of the warrior cat series, and I love the idea of this story, but honestly it is kinda boring. All it is, is well, just them talking… I want more details were is the: “ as she paced a bit faster still keeping her senses alert” like I said I want more detail. However it is a good idea, though… would it not be copywriting?
Keep trying!👍
Hi! I think you did a great job, but I really think you should fix the grammar(no offence) I like to write myself and one day hope to get my books published. But overall I think you did a great job and like the saying goes, “nothing worth having comes easy!” You did great! Just remember; Keep trying!
Bye now!
Oh yeah I almost forgot: I was wondering if you have Erin Hunter’s permission to use her story?
Okay I get the point…
Okay so I know that you want to write a book. But I think the punctuation and everything was pretty terrible but the book was good even though after a few confusions. Keep trying and I hope you don’t give up!!!
Maybe get it checked by me? I mean I’m really good at these editing stuff.
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Ummm so okay this book was good but the grammar is bad