Warriors

I know I can do better but I’m still glad there’s something to read cause everyone thinks I read too fast(and too much).

Ps: I’m 9 :)

so maybe try to make your grammar right or ask someone to basically be your editor but the storyline is good and I like the cover

It’s, a good story? You’ll get better overtime, just believe in yourself! And... other stuff. And also try to use other words when the talk. Like, instead of mewed, try mumbled or whispered or something. Alright, so... Good going?!