Provisional Revisions

In the psychological thriller "Provisional Revisions," A. L. Allen explores the seductive danger of certainty and the high cost of a life without surprises.

The Story

The protagonist, a man who views the world through the structured logic of a systems engineer, receives a mysterious, unbranded notebook and a pen that "bonds with fiber" and "resists erasure." Drawn to their precision, he begins journaling his days not in prose, but in code-like declarations.

At first, the results are intoxicatingly efficient. When he writes assert(day.outcome == "fine"), the lingering tensions of his workday simply vanish. When he "corrects" a professional mistake in the journal, the reality of the office shifts to match his entry—his errors are forgotten, and he is praised for a consistency he didn't actually maintain .

The Conflict

As he continues to "compile" his life, removing social noise and pruning personal connections to achieve a "steady state," he realizes the journal isn't just reflecting his wishes—it is enforcing them . The horrifying nature of this "alignment" is revealed when he accidentally deletes a part of his life he never meant to lose: his dog. Because he defined a condition where "conflict" was impossible, the universe simply removed the exception to the rule.

Key Themes

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The Cost of Optimization: The novel examines how the desire to minimize risk and maximize predictability can lead to a hollowed-out existence .

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Identity as Code: The protagonist discovers that once he defines himself as "static" and "reliable" to avoid pain, he loses the ability to be "adaptable" or to grow .

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The Weight of Permanence: In a world that "prefers coherence over mercy," every choice made for safety becomes a permanent structural change that cannot be undone .

"Provisional Revisions" is a chilling meditation on the choices we make when we are tired of being surprised, and a warning that the universe just might give us exactly what we ask for: a life perfectly, and irreversibly, aligned.