The Alpha's Mate: Book 1
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3.8 • 288 Ratings
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Publisher Description
As an Omega, 17-year-old Sarah is used to being at the bottom of the pecking order, even in her new pack and new high school. But her usually-boring life changes when she turns 18. She expects to shift—and nothing happens.
Now, as if being an Omega isn’t bad enough, Sarah is also human.
But Sarah, to her surprise, soon finds her mate: in the pack’s handsome and compassionate Alpha. And the lowly Omega finds herself rocketing to the top of her pack’s status as the new Luna.
Just as it seems that life is finally going her way, Sarah learns of a terrible betrayal that results in tragic death, exile, and upheaval of what should have been her storybook ending…
Or does it?
Customer Reviews
Not intrigued.
I never felt connected into the story. Drawn out. Not intrigued. Felt like junior high intellectual depth. Sorry to say this..
Story line is decent but lacks subsistence
Would love more I feel like I’m reading only the foot notes or highlights of a story line. The romance parts seemed a bit adolescent however I do kinda like that it’s not as detailed especially if the author is younger. I want to read more but I’m afraid the story isn’t full enough for me to want to purchase the rest of the story I hope in the next book/books that they get better. Also there’s a few spots where it should say for example “he holds my hand” instead it reads “he holds me hand”. As a writer my self I have to proof read over and over and over and over it happens to me when I’m in the zone sometimes I even do speak to text if I have ideas coming so fast or voice recording… anyways it’s a very nice story plot it has so much potential I wish it was more, I crave more, I want more, but the quickness and the lack is what makes me feel disappointed and unfulfilled. Details details and descriptions. Would give 5 stars if it had more & little bit more proof reading and I hope this doesn’t ever discourage the author because your brain is great with great ideas I encourage you keep writing please you’ll only get better you’re amazing. Your mind is needed your stories live on.
What is this?!
So bad, and like who says alpha and omega like what