The Among Us Crisis

I enjoyed this book in the first half but I was thoroughly displeased with the lackluster character development in act two. For starters, our protagonist does not seem to have undergone any major changes in the span of a year. This is entirely unrealistic to expect of any real person, and it takes me out of the immersion. However, the plot is well thought through and brings me joy every time. All in all, pretty mediocre but gave me a reason to continue living. 🥰🧐🥰🥳🤭😎✨💀😡✅😰😰🤭

You can’t just make a 5 page book and expect people to love it! You have to make it longer, like, at least 100 pages! You also have to recheck all the grammar and stuff so you can be taken seriously. Plus, you have to get permission from the creators before you get it published, or you’ll get copyright struck. Either that, or just change the entire book.

You gotta improve the plot and development but great