The Girl He Craves
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3.4 • 7 Ratings
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- $7.99
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- $7.99
Publisher Description
Dear Aiden Xavier, You were never supposed to kiss me in that library that day. You were never supposed to eat me out and then make love to me. And I was never supposed to fall in love with you even more, and neither were you. But we did, didn't we? We fell in love and now, we're paying the price. "You still taste so sweet Sophie, do you really think I'd ever forget your taste?"
Customer Reviews
Compelling but unfinished
The story can definitely hook you and draw you in , the grammar and inconsistencies can leave you frustrated… but the story compels you to move forward.
This is a very spicy read… and there are some interesting twists and turns. However the backup characters are a bit one dimensional (especially the toddler of the main character, who seems to spend most of his time sleeping).
However the most disappointing part is the fact that this story is unfinished… like it literally stops without resolving or tying up any loose ends.
This has the makings to be a great read - however the author is in desperate need of a competent editor and the ability to wrap up a story so it has a proper ending that can conclude the story without leaving the reader confused as to why it just stopped.
Proceed with caution.
Rip off!!!!!!
Where is the rest of it?! It’s not finished!!! It can’t be!!!