The Prince's Secret Baby
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4.1 • 455 Ratings
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Publisher Description
"Nearly two years on, and Raffaele, my dream-come-true Prince Charming, still doesn't know our little secret. He has an heir to his title: a beautiful baby girl."
Used to spending 12 hours a day in her restaurant kitchen, chef Maggie Bechet never expected to be swept off her feet by a European prince. Effortlessly charming, and a food lover just like her, Maggie is smitten, but after a whirlwind romance of private jets and royal balls, Raffaele disappears as quickly as he arrived. Unbeknownst to him, however, he left his mark: Maggie's pregnant, and her dashing prince is nowhere to be found…
Prince Raffaele fell for the gorgeous chef almost immediately. But after consenting to honor royal tradition and serve in his nation's military, the dashing prince is cut off from the world, the woman he's beginning to love, and the beautiful baby he fathered…
Soon, mother and father are going to be reunited, and Raffaele is going to learn that he's got a royal family of his own…
Customer Reviews
Slow
This book was very slow and if you read to fast you would never know that they slept together to have a baby.all it say is she laid her head on his chest say what yep baby
bad
terrible
Took forever to get to the main point, then rushed it.
The concept was cute, but the author totally sold one thing and gave another. The book was more about the minute details of the meetings rather than about the main topic, the secret baby. If you’re going to give away the only tasty morsel (aka the “secret” baby”) in book description, at least don’t make the reader wait till 3/4 of the book is done to get to it that part and then rush the rest. Honestly, the first 3/4 of the book could have been summarized in a much more captivating manner in about 1/4-1/3 of the writing. The remaining 1/4 of the original book should have been more dramatized or at least expanded instead of rushed to finish an already tediously slow and painfully detailed book.
If this is the author’s first try, then I’m sorry for sounding harsh. If not, then it’s better late than never to learn how to improve. Please take it as constructive criticism and know that I would 100% read another one of your stories if you can learn from mistakes and improve your writing, especially by using your readers’ feedback.