Warriors ScorchFang's Omen
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3.1 • 211 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Scorchkit wants to be Deputy some day, but somehow his Destiny had charged from being a warrior. Starclan changed, his Destiny so he has two choices. He can become a Warrior or become Medicine cat. If he chosoes Medicine cat he can't have a mate, if he chooses Warrior, Starclan will never visit him again. Later on, he actually chooses medicine cat at his Apprentice naming...What happens next...Find out.
Created by: Jordan Claire Drouin a Sir John Franklin High School Student.
Customer Reviews
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Hi me again for those of you who don’t know I’m Jasminefur. This one is ok and BTW Cinderfern / beachcat7575, can I have Maplefur? Also type Warriors + Wings of Fire = LIFE if you agree
Adoptable cats BTW tell me if u want 1 I will give it to u
O = open
Q = taken
O Sharpeye a brown tom who has great eyesight
O Whitepelt a white she-cat who is deaf in one ear
O Nightheart an obnoxious but kind black tom
O Daisyfern a very energetic she-cat who loves flowers
Also, my first EVIL ocs (hehehehehe……)
Smoke-a dark grey tom
Age:67 moons
History: is still FURIOUS at (kittypet) parents for abandoning him and lives in a territory similar to ShadowClan
Mate: Marsh
Marsh-a tabby she-cat
Age: 59 moons
History: former BloodClan warrior, ran away after Scourge was killed and devoted life to killing Firestar (never succeeded)
Mate: Smoke
Kits: Shadow(their only non-evil kit, ultimately murdered when parents found out), Claw, Shade, Scar
Chapter order:
Prologue : Mosskit’s promise
Chapter 1: Scorchfang’s omen
Mint Leaf woke to “Wake up, Mint Leaf!” It was Willowpaw waking her up because Forestpaw had already hurt herself while hunting.
Edit: yeah I gave up on my fanfic sorry for people who wanted to read it (I don’t think anyone did) :(
~Mintleaf of CloudClan
~AllieCat
This is not good
It is not good because they don’t credit Erin hunter at all and they misspelled a lot and there’s a lot of plagiarism
-Stonepelt of ice clan
Do you like it?
Hears echoleap can’t do part two of the sticks but here’s my story
Prologue
As I come around the nursery to get my apprentice name. Spotted star says I look down at my warrior ancestors and say may this apprentice be an apprentice for now on your name will be Echopaw I will be your mentor. I can hardly believe it spottedstar is going to be a mentor manager. I hate being a manager. Tomorrow I will write chapter 1 and two.
Turtle:thinks of a place to hide jayfeather and air kit comes out of nowhere and put turtle down J
I ended up doing part two for some reason
Jayfeather:. It’s my stick
Airkit: It’s my stick
turtle: how many lives have you saved a few and I’ve saved thousands of lives. I deserve the stick airkit crashed out
Jayfeather: no it’s mine to Airkit goes and gets a twoleg rifle. All right give me the stick right now.
turtle and feather; no
airkit: crashes out. It’s mine.
I will be writing part three tomorrow. Don’t worry I echoleap out out. Also cloudstar clan pls add me
Part. Three of the Stick
As airkit is fighting turtle runs
Airkit: we’re did he go?
Jayfeather: I don’t know it’s your fault he got away plus this stick is mine
Meanwhile turtle is trying to make 3 sticks for everyone but forgot that animus magic doesn’t work
Turtle: Bru
Jayfeather and Airkit: we give you one chance HAND OVER THE STICK
Jayfeather: because it’s mine
Airkit: no it mine Jayfeather
Turtle: why don’t you guys go and find another stick to have.
To be continued……………..
Now it’s time we did chapter one
Chapter 1
Me and spottedstar are going to mark the borders today yayyyyyyy.
As we walk I hear a Russell I open my mouth and smell mouse spottedstar can I hunt the mouse?
Fine says spottedstar I get into my hunting crouch my tail low I stalk towards the mouse and I strike I killed the mouse before it could get away spottedstar says good catch you can eat it if you want to because we’re on a border patrol
I say I will add it to the fresh kill pile
Ok says spottedstar. As we are marking the trees I wonder who are my parents and why did they leave me my clanemates say they don’t know but I don’t believe them. As we enter the camp I go to put my mouse on the fresh kill pile can I eat with you says frogpaw. Ok I say frog paw got his apprentice name when
The other day was going to be
My apprentice ceremony I ask him do you know anything about my parents frogpaw starts to sweat I wonder why noo says frogpaw I say what are you hiding from me.
That’s it on mosskits thing I will do chapter 3 echoleap out I hoped you like this chapter
Tomorrow I will do part 4 of the stick sometime very interesting happens now echoleap OUT!!.
Why is this book so short
It’s time I did chapter 4 or five. No part of stick today sorry.
Chapter 5 or four I don’t know
Frogpaws trying to think of a good lie but that echopaw actually dragged him out of his nest while he was asleep is the most crazy part yet like how do get a cat and the cat not knowing what’s going on like bru. Soooo are you going to tell me what I want to know are do I have to claw some sense into you buddy says echopaw. She threatening me like lol. I don’t know what you talking about says frogpaw oh yes you do says echopaw I will give you to the count of ten or I’m going to dump you in a river says echopaw you
Would not says frogpaw 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 ok ok ok I’ll tell you says frogpaw ok says echopaw.
Sorry but your going to have to go to the other book to read chapter 5 or six I don’t know