Warriors ScorchFang's Omen

Hi me again for those of you who don’t know I’m Jasminefur. This one is ok and BTW Cinderfern / beachcat7575, can I have Maplefur? Also type Warriors + Wings of Fire = LIFE if you agree

Adoptable cats BTW tell me if u want 1 I will give it to u

O = open
Q = taken

O Sharpeye a brown tom who has great eyesight
O Whitepelt a white she-cat who is deaf in one ear
O Nightheart an obnoxious but kind black tom
O Daisyfern a very energetic she-cat who loves flowers

Also, my first EVIL ocs (hehehehehe……)

Smoke-a dark grey tom
Age:67 moons
History: is still FURIOUS at (kittypet) parents for abandoning him and lives in a territory similar to ShadowClan
Mate: Marsh

Marsh-a tabby she-cat
Age: 59 moons
History: former BloodClan warrior, ran away after Scourge was killed and devoted life to killing Firestar (never succeeded)
Mate: Smoke
Kits: Shadow(their only non-evil kit, ultimately murdered when parents found out), Claw, Shade, Scar

Chapter order:
Prologue : Mosskit’s promise
Chapter 1: Scorchfang’s omen

Mint Leaf woke to “Wake up, Mint Leaf!” It was Willowpaw waking her up because Forestpaw had already hurt herself while hunting.

Edit: yeah I gave up on my fanfic sorry for people who wanted to read it (I don’t think anyone did) :(

~Mintleaf of CloudClan
~AllieCat

It is not good because they don’t credit Erin hunter at all and they misspelled a lot and there’s a lot of plagiarism

-Stonepelt of ice clan

Great, improvement is just needed in punctuation and spelling. However this is a big improvement from your previous book. fanfic time!

Forgekit stumbled to Dapplebark, and said,
“Look what I can do! See that butterfly? I’m going to hunt it! Ready? Mother look!”
Dapplebark switched her attention to Forgekit.
“I’m going to be really quiet,” whispers Forgekit.
Forgekit tries stalking the butterfly, and rustles a branch. Thankfully, the butterfly didn’t notice.
“Almost there,” Forgekit mutters, barely louder than wind. Forgekit pounces, but his front paws hit the bush rather than the butterfly. The butterfly flew away.
“Mousedung! I could’ve gotten it!” Forgekit pouts.
Forgekit padded to her mother, occasionally stumbling, and kept her head low in sadness.
“Mother, I almost did it, but failed. Sorry for wasting your-,”
Forgekit was interrupted by Dapplebark,
“No, don’t apologize! You did good!”
“I did?” Forgekit asks.
“You did!”

“Forgekit is a natural! Isn’t she?” Dapplebark whispered to Thrushrock.
“She is!” Thrushrock, almost a few moments before finishing his sentence, was interrupted by Leafkit.
“Father, I want to go to the medicine den!”
“One second! Ok lets go,”
Leafkit got held by her scruff from Thrushrock. He padded to the medicine den.
“Do you mind if my kit explored your den? I promise she won’t cause any ruckus,” asks Thrushrock, gently putting Leafkit down.
“Oh yeah that’s fine,” replies Cloudpath.
Leafkit looked around and asked,
“What’s that?”
“Cobweb, used for wounds”
“That?”
“Catnip, for stress,”
“Wait, you have herbs for feelings too? I thought you only had herbs for injuries,”
“Yeah, that was what I thought too, back when I was an apprentice.”
“What about that?”
“Juniper, for belly ache.”
“This?”
“Marigold, for greencough”
Leafkit asked what each herb was called and what it was for, and Cloudpath answered each time.
“I want to be a medicine cat! Can I be one when I’m older?” Leafkit asks.
“You can if I don’t have an apprentice by then,” answers Cloudpath.
Leafkit yipped in happiness.
“Okay, lets go, goodbye Cloudpath,” mewed Thrushrock.
“Alright! Bye Cloudpath,” Leafkit says.
Thrushrock picked up Leafkit by the scruff, and headed to the nursery.
“What are you guys doing,” asks Leafkit.
“Deciding on a game,” Forgekit responds.
“Can we play mossball?” Leafkit meowed.
“No, I don’t like that game, that's for kits,” Fangkit replied firmly.
“Aren't we ki-,” Leafkit got cut off.
“No don’t argue with Fangkit, he’ll bite your pelt off”
“I want to play mossball, though,”
“No! We are going to practice fighting, whether you like it or not!”
Fangkit lunged at Leafkit, teeth bared. Fangkit scratched Leafkit, while Leafkit did not know how to fight. Leafkit hissed, but it was no use. Fangkit sunk his teeth on Leafkit’s leg, and it was bleeding tremendously.
“Holy starclan!” Exclaims Forgekit.
“Mother!” Forgekit shouts.
Forgekit bared her teeth, and bit down on Fangkit’s hind leg.
“Mother! Leafkit is bleeding!”
Leafkit shouts in pain.
“What happened.. Holy Starclan! Why is Leafkit bleeding, and why is there blood on you and Fangkit?”
“Fangkit bit Leaf-,”
“Thrushrock! Come here!” Dapplebark shouts. “Bring Leafkit to Cloudpath!”
“Holy, why is Leafkit bleedin-,”
“Just bring her to the medicine cat!”
Thrushrock runs to Leafkit, and quickly brings Leafkit to the Medicine Den. Forgekit follows, until Dapplebark stops her.
“You’re not leaving until you tell me everything!”
“Fangkit wanted to practice fighting skills, but Leafkit refused! Fangkit scratched Leafkit and bit her! I just bit Fangkit!”
Dapplebark glared at Fangkit and snarled,
“Why did you do that over a game, it’s such a foolish thing to do! You’re a kit, act like it! Don’t act like you are Sharpfang, go stay over in our bed and think about what you’ve done!”
Then Dapplebark said in a calmer tone,
“Go check on your sister, Forgekit.”
“I will!”
Forgekit padded to the Medicine Den.
“Is she going to be alright?” Forgekit said, concerned.
“Yes, she just needs some cobwebs and rest,” Cloudpath responded.
“Can I stay with her? I don’t want to sleep with my brother,” asks Forgekit.
“Yes, as long as you don’t tear or mess up anything,”
“Father, can you tell my mother that I’m staying until tomorrow?”
“Sure, and I am also going to stay in the nursery, I trust Cloudpath enough to take care of you two” replied Thrushrock. Thrushrock trotted out of the medicine den.
The moon came up, blanketing the camp in darkness. Forgekit and Leafkit slept next to each other.
Forgekit was in the nursery, peacefully playing with moss. The birds were chirping, then silent. The forest went still, until a smoky smell arrived. Her clanmates were screaming and shrieking.
“All cats in kestrelclan! Evacuate! Bring your kits! Forestfire!” Kestrelstar announced.
“Hop on me!” Exclaimed Dapplebark. Forgekit was too late and was left behind. Fire surrounded her.
Forgekit jolted awake. Then she realized she was fine. It was a dream. No—a nightmare. Leafkit was also awake. The sun was half risen. Forgekit glanced at Leafkit. Then she looked back in front of herself. She was too frightened to go back to sleep. When the sun fully rose, she told Cloudpath about the dream. She said it was nothing to worry about, as it was only a dream, and Forgekit never thought about being a medicine cat, so it couldn’t be a sign from Starclan, right? Forgekit also told Leafkit about the dream when Leafkit awoke. Leafkit had the same dream, as well. Was it a sign? No, it can’t be! If it was, Cloudpath would have gotten it before Forgekit and Leafkit did, since she is a Medicine cat.

Not done and skipped parts to fit it btw