Mosskit dreams her way into Starclan. She meets Mossyear, a Starclan cat who makes her a promise. The promise is that he will teach her to catch prey, to hunt and fish.
Created by a Sir John Franklin student in Yellowknife NWT.
Good effort but...
I can tell you are really into Warriors and that’s great, don’t get me wrong! But yeah. Be careful with the plagiarism stuff, k? Fanfic is great and I like to write it too but you have to make it your own. Tweak lots of things and DON’T call it Warriors if you are going to publish it. I understand you are probably young but like others have mentioned, don’t repeat yourself too much and correct punctuation errors. Overall it was good though. Work on these things, and you could turn into a pretty good writer!👍✌️😸
WARRIORS 4 LIFE!!!!!!
Whoever wrote this book is now 10 of something, and he/she wrote it in 2013! Seriously! So stop hating on him/her! It’s good work for them!
Keep the good work up
I haven’t read the book yet but I want to say don’t listen to the meanies sure the book cold probably could use some improvements but all book need some improvements. So keep up the good work and don’t let others decide your future and try to make your own ideas! (Don’t look at the rating i haven’t read the book yet so my rating is inaccurate)