Warriors

I can tell you are really into Warriors and that’s great, don’t get me wrong! But yeah. Be careful with the plagiarism stuff, k? Fanfic is great and I like to write it too but you have to make it your own. Tweak lots of things and DON’T call it Warriors if you are going to publish it. I understand you are probably young but like others have mentioned, don’t repeat yourself too much and correct punctuation errors. Overall it was good though. Work on these things, and you could turn into a pretty good writer!👍✌️😸
WARRIORS 4 LIFE!!!!!!

First of all, I don’t even think this is legal! You’ve copied a well known series and not even given any credit to Erin Hunter! Next, why is there no sample? I mean, at least give us a view of what this is- Last, who do you even think you are? That’s a copyright violation! Breaking the law!

-pigeonstar of thunderclan

Whoever wrote this book is now 10 of something, and he/she wrote it in 2013! Seriously! So stop hating on him/her! It’s good work for them!