With a name like Blaze, I should have become a firefighter instead of a lawyer. Then again, being a cutthroat corporate lawyer might be more dangerous. When my dad got sick, I came back home to help out at the family ranch. I never expected to run into someone like Dallas. The alluring veterinarian caught my eye immediately. She's got a great body, intelligence, and passion, the perfect package. Too bad she can't stand me. Yes, sometimes I can be a bit abrasive, but I know I can get to her. With the help of a few flowers, I've already started. Sure, she doesn't know they are from me, but women love a little mystery. There's also the little issue of my current client. I can't help it that I'm representing the man trying to evict her.
This is a cute story, but the proofing / editing is very poorly done - it was a distraction.
Stilted dialogue and terrible editing