“So I just might die a virgin after all. That’s what sucks about the end of the world, you just don’t plan for it and once it’s upon you it’s too late. It’s been a few weeks since I’ve had time to actually write anything down, which sucks because more has happened in my life in the past three weeks than it has in all my seventeen, (soon to be eighteen) years. So I’m going to give you a quick recap, because my diary is totally a living breathing thing and really cares…not.
Basically we are on the run from Lorsan, the dark elf king, while also looking for the Book of the Elves, which he stole (butt head), while at the same time attempting to shut down the sale of Rapture, a liquid drug the dark elves devised to enslave the human race. If you ask me their goals are a little lofty, but then nobody asked me, and therein lies their problem. But our problems don’t end there. On top of trying to get Rapture out of the human realm and taking out Lorsan, we also have to rescue Cassie’s parents. Apparently there’s a dark elf who is delusional and believes Cassie is his Chosen reincarnated. So naturally he thought kidnapping her parents would win her heart. Loser. What happen to love notes and flowers? Anyways, now you’re caught up, roughly. The point is, life is about as jacked up as it can get at the moment. I would like to be able to give some Braveheart worthy speech and say that we totally got this, but honestly, I have no idea if we can pull this off.” ~ Elora
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Please, please, invest in a decent editor
When mistakes pull the reader from the story, it negates the positive thoughts from the reader about the author.
The main frustration is when a character is talking and continues into a new paragraph, the new paragraph needs to start with a quote to show the reader the conversation is continuing.
Grammar and punctuation are important to this reader!
I read book 1 of the Elfin series an became hooked!! How can they be over I'm sure there can be more adventures for "Trick"??!?! The writing was very alluring I found myself literally pulled into their world. Thanks for writing them simply very good entertainment from our own realities aside from television!!
Quinn does it again! Just when I thought I knew how everything would play out, Bam!! Twists and turns all the way! Totally looking forward to the next chapter in Lisa's new life!!! Thank you Quinn for sharing your talent with the world!! Love your work!!