Warriors: A Vision of Shadows #6: The Raging Storm

Hi Ivywhisker- this is my OC, Nightsong. If there is still space, could she join as a warrior?

Name: Nightsong
Mate: Stormshade
Role: Warrior
Kits: Silverkit and Duskkit.

-:/Moonsplash of DarkClan/:-

This book sucked. I have stayed on top of all the Warriors books ever written, and for the most part, they left me feeling moderately satisfied! But this one? No, this book was awful. A Vision of Shadows blew it early, having Darktail die early on in the arc, therefore ending up with several books lacking any stakes. When SkyClan threatened to leave the forest, I didn't care. I don't care about any of these cats. They're all rehashes of old, better characters, and their problems seem trite and boring. This book has no climax. No stakes. Everything is wrapped up nice and neat, and it's BORING. I skimmed the majority of it because I was bored. The Erins have given me no reason to care about anyone other than Alderheart, because Violetshine and Twigbranch are wishy-washy and impossible to get invested in. And the way they excused Finleap's abusive behavior was disgusting. The whole subplot with him wanting kits made my eyes roll, and I rolled them even harder when he did a complete 180° at the end and apologized for every mean thing he'd ever done, blah blah blah.
This book had no interesting plots, no compelling characters, not even rising and falling action! Having Tree as a mediator that can't mediate is stupid. Having all the leaders unanimously agree to bring back SkyClan after it starts raining is stupid. Having deathberries be the cure to some previously-unmentioned "infection" is stupid.
These books used to keep me on the edge of my seat, but clearly, diplomacy and talking about your problems with other clans are all the rage now. Honestly, I actually prefer the wild and senseless bloodshed, because that at least was interesting.
Step it UP, Erins. You are better than this. As writers, you should hold yourselves responsible for what you put out, and refuse to have A Vision of Shadows end with this tripe.
Not worth the $10. Do not buy this book.

ThunderClan and RiverClan are now closed, the message board is the first arc and the New Prophecy arc, ShadowClan the Power of Three, and WindClan A Vision Of Shadows. SkyClan is the Omen of the Stars and BloodClan is in Dawn of the Clans. The information to submit is in the Broken Code arc. Thanks Espresso Cat!
*inhales*
*****IF YOU HAVEN’T SUBMITTED CATS BEFORE, PLEASE CHECK THE REVIEWS OF ANY BROKEN CODE BOOK BEFORE SUBMITTING!*****
*exhales* sorry for all caps just had to make it clear 😂 😜

WindClan:
Leader: Swiftstar, white tom with blue eyes. Submitted by Rūnningstār of IceClan.
(Apprentice, Snowpaw)
Deputy: Runningleap, white she-cat with brown eyes and a scar on her forehead.
Medicine cat(s): Darksight, black tom with fluffy white tail and silver underbelly. Blind ice-blue eyes. Submitted by Espresso Cat.
Haretuft, brown tom. Submitted by Rūnningstār of IceClan.
(Apprentice, Heatherpaw)
Warriors:
Codtail, silver tabby tom with black stripes and a fluffy white tail.
(Apprentice, Ghostpaw)
Pebblepelt, pale gray tom with darker spots and amber eyes. Submitted by xXGalacticSkiesXx.
Swiftbrook, white tom with silver patches that have dark gray stripes inside of them and green eyes. Submitted by xXGalacticSkiesXx.
(Apprentice, Spectralpaw)
Queens:
Ravenflow, black she-cat with gray sides and a white chest. Hazel eyes. Mother to three kits, Quietkit, Loudkit, and Shimmerkit. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart.
Kits:
Quietkit, tiny gray she-kit with blue eyes
Loudkit, black tom-kit with brown eyes
Shimmerkit, gray-and-white she-kit with a sparkling pelt and hazel eyes
Elders:
Graywood, brown tom with gray splashes and green eyes. Submitted by Espresso Cat.
Hawkstrike, gray tom with green eyes. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart.
Fawnsong, black she-cat with hazel eyes. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart.
Apprentices:
Snowpaw, white she-cat with blue eyes and one black paw. Submitted by Rūnningstār of IceClan.
Heatherpaw, tortoiseshell she-cat. Medicine cat apprentice. Submitted by Rūnningstār of IceClan.
Spectralpaw, white tabby tom with one black paw, pale gray splashes, and gray eyes. Submitted by Espresso Cat.
Ghostpaw, black she-cat with white-and-gray splashes and pale gray eyes. Submitted by Espresso Cat.

WINDCLAN
3/12 warriors
1/1 leader CLOSED
1/3 queens
3/8 kits
1/1 deputy CLOSED
2/1 med. cats CLOSED
1/1 med. cat apprentice CLOSED
4/7 apprentices
3/5 elders
~Ivywhisker