Spinward Fringe Broadcasts 1 and 2: Resurrection and Awakening
Spinward Fringe, Broadcasts 1 & 2
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4.5 • 557 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Captain Valance has no memory of his past. Left adrift on a strange ship, he begins a new life. Years later he's become a well known hired gun while searching for clues to his past. This follows the First Light Chronicles cult hit Space Opera series.
Customer Reviews
Great work in progress
The story is really good. The characters have depth. The science of future travel reads like the author visited the future and returned with a comfortable use of the jargon.
What still needs work: PROOFREADING!
Aaaaaack! Get an editor so your readers who know how to punctuate, spell, and use words correctly aren't having convulsions trying to resist getting out a red pen!
Also, a few plot elements are introduced a bit late, and while interesting, could've been hinted at a lot earlier so they don't seem like after thoughts.
I want to keep reading the series to find out what happens, but the ongoing need for editing (mistakes on most every page), is distracting and painful so that the pleasure is minimized.
Minor formatting problem
This book is as great as the author's previous books, but it has a problem or something that causes about half of the paragraphs to be in a differently sized font. I can still read the book, but this problem quickly becomes annoying.
Spinward Fringe Broadcast 1 and 2
Fun read great SiFI