Warriors Super Edition: Firestar's Quest

Hi guys this is my first fanfic ever so please tell me what you think. Reviews in the broken code book one. the name of the book is Dawn of wild. Also can someone please tell me how these submissions work? And if u want to be added to my story please tell me in the broken code book one.

Cedarheart padded over to the nursery with a plump sparrow hanging from his jaws. “How is Glassglow?” He asked Leafheart anxiously. “She’s expecting kids any moment now.” She reassured. Cedarheart pushed his way into the den. He dropped his fresh-kill in front of his mate. “How are you?” He asked. “I can feel the kits. They are right here.” There was an excited gleam in her eyes. That excitement changed to pain as she began pushing. “Come on, come on, keep pushing,” Cedarheart urged. “I can see the first ones fluff.”
“This is harder than you think it is.” she rasped through clenched teeth. Cedarheart held his breath as the first kit came out. It lifted its head to him. Cedarheart gasped. His son was unlike any other kit he had ever seen. For one, he was an orange tom with gray stripes. But what really got his father was something far more extraordinary. The kit’s eyes were covered in a flap of smooth golden fur.
The next kit was a copy of the first one, except that he didn’t have any fur over his eyes. The last kit was a little bit smaller than the other two.He was a gray tom with a white spot on his head and one white paw. Upon closer inspection Cederheart saw that half of his lower jaw was also white.

“Mom why does Oakleaf act like he’s the boss of everyone even thought he is a medicine cat,”Quietkit wondered. “Well he used to be a warrior but became a medicine cat so he does have some warrior skills with him,”she answer. “Cool I guess,”Desertkit chimed in “but why did he not just stay a warrior,”Desertkit said “Well hmh…you’ll have to ask Aspentouch about that,”she sighed. “Can we go now,”Quietkit bounced up. “Or we could just ask Oakleaf himself,”Desertkit pointed out. “Oh no not with your attitude towards Oakleaf Desertkit,”His mother shook her head. “Come on out we go,”She pushed them out. “Lavenderwish I haven’t seen you outside in a long time,”A cat chuckled. “Wait who’s Lavenderwish,” Quietkit asked confused.”That would be me,”His mother nodded. “And who’s that who just spoke to you,”Desertkit asked this time. “That is Cloudclan’s deputy Frogleap,”she replied with a nod. “Frogleap is Aspentouch around,”Lavenderwish called out. “Yup should be in the Elders den with Birdpaw,”he answered. Quietkit looked around shouldn’t the elders den smell of old cats he thought sniffing the air. “Let’s go,”His mother led him to a den with a log over top of it. Quietkit ducked inside looking to see three cats talking to each other and one talking to his father while Birdpaw cleaned out the nests. “Aspentouch,”Lavenderwish got his dad’s attention. The Tom looked to where the sound came from “yes,”he asked. “Your kits are wondering about Oakleaf,”she responded. “Well Oakleaf was a warrior before he became a medicine cat,”Aspentouch began. “Now if you want to know the reason he went from such a fine role to medicine cat well I believe it was for some prophecy,”he thought for a moment. “Aspentouch are you going to fix my bedding or not,”a cat interrupted. “Yes, right coming Sweetrose,”he mewed padding off. “Hope I could help,”he told them over his shoulder. “Not very sweet if you ask me,”Desertkit grumbled. “Hey you two kits come here,”Quietkit watched a Tom from the group of three cats call out. He looked to Lavenderwish who nodded to them. Quietkit slowly stepped forward making his way to the cats. “I’m Deathwhisper,”he introduced himself and these other two are Bindlight and Ivorysong,”he said a two she-cat murmured a hello. “What do you want,”Desertkit asked bored. “We got a story to tell you,”Ivorysong said while grinning. “Ooo a story,”Quietkit settled down shifting once or twice.”This is story of the past from a time very long ago-,”

Thanks for reading next Chapter will bein Bramblestars storm. Much more will be explained. 😄

BerryStar twitched her tail as her clan followed her down the desert path. “BerryStar…I’m tired…” Yawned her kit, AspinKit. “I know darling. We will rest soon,” She murmured picking up her daughters scruff between her teeth. Her mate and deputy SlitheringTail padded beside her. “The kits are tired,” He hissed. Their three other kits where riding on his back. “We can’t keep walking much longer, the warriors and elders and every other cat needs rest,” BerryStars head dropped but she picked it back up. “We will rest here,” She announced,carefully putting her daughter down. AspinKit stirred kicking out but then settling down. BerryStar leaped onto a sand dune. “We will make camp here. Working on digging out the sand into a hollow,lining it with moss and dirt to make it sturdy,so when winds pick it out camp wont blow away. RainClan is no more. We live with the sand and flow with it. SandClan will thrive here.”